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You were so cold Couldn't hold you Bells tol(le)d life gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 5:05:00 PM
I wasn't familiar with this form but like the sound of it. Your three lines tell a sad tale but a clear picture. I agree with Carolyn the play on told is very clever. well done. Anna-Marie. thank you for your kind comments to me this morning...cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:55:00 AM
Very clever use of "told" and "tolled," Anna-Marie. I'm not familiar with the than-bauk form, but you make it very interesting. Excellent play on words in your last line and a great poem, too! Love, carolyn
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