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On the wrong horse we placed our bet Feral lust was our middle name Carrying burden of our shame Our heart was trapped in desire’s net Root cause, bondage to mind-body Succumbing to thought forms shoddy We’re filled with remorse and regret So we’ve turned now inward our gaze Silence sets us free from the maze We embraced not all who we met So we chose to make a fresh start Simply by melding head with heart Now breath by breath, we pay love’s debt One with oneness, in surrender As rises within, bliss thunder On the wrong horse we placed our bet Our heart was trapped in desire’s net We’re filled with remorse and regret We embraced not all who we met Now breath by breath, we pay love’s debt 11-January-2023 Constanza poetry form (invented by Connie Marcum Wong)

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Date: 1/11/2023 2:08:00 AM
So many lose money because of gambling on horses and on another things too.
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Date: 1/11/2023 6:40:00 AM
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