Debt

And why this curse was placed on me
base of hallow lands
and why it fell with so much glee
from lace of someone's hands

to follow me from crib to grave
to gut me once and yet to taunt
to covet me into a slave
a ghost appears but not to haunt

to tell a tale this apparition
to show me pain without regret
to settle me, not the rendition
of a man that no one's met

for like the tree I'm in the forest
but unlike them, I can't be heard
and for my lot I should be sorest
because I've lived in the absurd

I scramble now from fear to sadness
looking for my days gone bye
and once they swore that I was the badness
as they told me not to cry

And in myself I still believe him
perched upon his safety net
but I have given more than one limb
I have paid his endless debt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/28/2016 7:57:00 PM
Thanks Teddy!
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Date: 7/28/2016 5:30:00 PM
Congrats Timothy, for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 7/27/2016 9:52:00 PM
A sad story. Good rhymes and potential.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 7/28/2016 1:56:00 PM
Thanks Tom, nice to get comments.
Date: 3/31/2016 12:29:00 PM
Really nice write.....
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Date: 3/25/2016 11:58:00 PM
to tell a tale this... I so enjoyed. Sounds like you've given more than expected, and somehow it might not be enough... love the write. LINDA
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Date: 3/25/2016 9:00:00 PM
Tremendous write.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/25/2016 10:13:00 PM
Thanks Lenny! I really appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/12/2016 7:04:00 PM
Use the forms section, I have learned tons from trying new forms. You already have skills.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/12/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thanks for that Richard I really have no idea what Im doing, but I like it. I'll check it.
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