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Debt

So long that I had not seen you Exposed and composed In the backdrop of wild naked nature, I had never experienced Aesthetic senses for values. I lived but never loved, I never knew I can be so lyrical. When you lay beside me I fondled your breasts And I could gather unspoken soft words That were scattered like dew-wet petals, I synchronized them To indulge in any emotion That I wished to relish. So long that I had not kissed you I never knew, what satisfaction Does a drop of tear contain, How they sparkle, My total conscience is deep in your womanhood. In your eyes I could know That this planet is not all together ice-cold green, They were there But only now I know there is a sky, Numerous planets, stars and other universes Revolve around you ,revolve around me Revolve around everyone who loves. You had a swollen ocean in you And every ripple jingles in my rhymes, In every possible scheme, Your heart and mind I comprehended deeply. So long that I had not made you conceive I never remembered,- Trees and vines,birds and animals Flowers and human souls, And even the gods Are my own creations of some yonder era. For this new life For this regaining Of my eternal entity and identity I am indebted to you, I am indebted to you. ***********

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Date: 5/25/2010 3:25:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:26:00 AM
THE FEELING IS QUIET OMINOUS AND I LOVED YOUR WORK AND YOUR LOVE FOR THAT LADY.
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Date: 5/25/2010 5:06:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devashish. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2010 11:10:00 PM
a very passionate write. sounds beautiful for who ever this is written fore.and i hope that you have a fun time here at poetry soup.very interesting name.lol -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/24/2010 2:56:00 PM
I like the flow of the words and essence of this poem. I am so sorry to hear about the place accident and the loss of lives in India. I will pray for the relatives and lives loss. Blessings, Joseph
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