Debt

So long that I had not seen you
Exposed and composed
In the backdrop of wild naked nature,
I had never experienced
Aesthetic senses for values.
I lived but never loved,
I never knew I can be so lyrical.

When you lay beside me
I fondled your breasts
And I could gather unspoken soft words
That were scattered like dew-wet petals,
I synchronized them
To indulge in any emotion
That I wished to relish.

So long that I had not kissed you
I never knew, what satisfaction
Does a drop of tear contain,
How they sparkle,
My total conscience is deep in your womanhood.

In your eyes I could know
That this planet is not all together ice-cold green,
They were there
But only now I know there is a sky,
Numerous planets, stars and other universes
Revolve around you ,revolve around me
Revolve around everyone who loves.

You had a swollen ocean in you
And every ripple jingles in my rhymes,
In every possible scheme,
Your heart and mind I comprehended deeply.

So long that I had not made you conceive
I never remembered,-
Trees and vines,birds and animals
Flowers and human souls,
And even the gods
Are my own creations of some yonder era.

For this new life
For this regaining
Of my eternal entity and identity
I am indebted to you,
I am indebted to you.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 3:25 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Gupta Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 6:26 AM
THE FEELING IS QUIET OMINOUS AND I LOVED YOUR WORK AND YOUR LOVE FOR THAT LADY.
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May 25, 2010 at 5:06 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Devashish. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Chachere Avatar
May 24, 2010 at 11:10 PM
a very passionate write. sounds beautiful for who ever this is written fore.and i hope that you have a fun time here at poetry soup.very interesting name.lol -Always&Forever Lynette
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May 24, 2010 at 2:56 PM
I like the flow of the words and essence of this poem. I am so sorry to hear about the place accident and the loss of lives in India. I will pray for the relatives and lives loss. Blessings, Joseph
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