Debris

debris from dark storm dredged by the leaf skimmer - grandsons putter* in pool * to move or act aimlessly or idly

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2022 12:41:00 PM

I really like this one, Kim. Awesome imagery

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/26/2022 4:15:00 PM

Thank you :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/25/2022 4:38:00 PM

Good one, Kim. Glad to know you have grandkids...and children do what is pleasant for them. There are no rules on how to enjoy themselves. We adults can he harsh.not saying you are! Children are free like birds...let them enjoy. Hugs, Panagiotaxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/25/2022 5:34:00 PM

Kim, you love God, life, America,adults, chilrenn, the planet! It shows in your poetry. Good for you. And glad they were with you for two weeks... I miss my grandson being grown...when we had overnights. He starts his sophomore year of HS on August 2nd! Such an outstanding person at his age. Hugs, Panagiota xxx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2022 5:25:00 PM

They had a great time these two weeks! Thanks, Pangie!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2022 12:54:00 PM

Trust our sweet young ones to mess up things. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2022 5:25:00 PM

Oh no, the storm…but the leaf skimmer cleaned up the pool so they could enjoy!