Debbie Guzzi Being

D awn breaks the skyline
E nding the slumber we had
B ending to your will   
B alancing good with bad   
I deology forsook us   
E arning no merits between 

G oing that extra mile 
U nforeseen
Z ones we never dare to touch
Z oomed past reality and such
I  lost every sense I bore 

B ecause of you I am NO MORE
E nding all that ever was
I know not how to carry on
N egotiations impossible
G one


6/20/13
contest: To Be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Ehlinger Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 11:33 PM
Wow! Intriguing! Congrats!
Nair Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:36 PM
Very clever,.. Congrats, Judy!!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Congratulations Judy!
Guzzi Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 1:06 PM
You went where no one gone before ;)Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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