Deaths Love

Deaths Love

The story of love that was never supposed to unfold
Is the saddest story to ever behold
For Death was never suppose to love
But their was an angel above

Her angel lips was a sight Death desired
But would never acquire
She was so beautiful that the sky lit up around her
Deaths day would go by in a blur

Soon Deaths job was forgotten
Which left no one to rotten
Death would wait forever just to be with his angel
Though the love would be fatal

After no one died for a year the angel confronted Death
Death had to take a large breath
Then he told the angel about how he loved her
She told him that the love would never exist and to forget them together

Saddened Death began to murder
All the innocent which lead to him becoming a monster
The angel he loved was the only one who could save him
Which lead to the angel to sit on a broken limb

Now Death was left without a head
The angel was kicked out of Heaven and left on a deathbed
And when she was close to dying she could hear Death cry
Which she could only say goodbye

And as she took one final breath
Death realized he was the one to cause her death
So he said goodbye to the world and he could only decide
To commit the worse crime that was suicide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 25, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Shyann, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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September 10, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Thank you very much!
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August 25, 2015 at 6:47 PM
Intriguing write, congratulations
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September 10, 2021 at 6:21 AM
Thank you!
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August 25, 2015 at 2:59 AM
Wow what a splendid write Shyann! Congrats on big win!
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September 10, 2021 at 6:21 AM
I appreciate it!
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August 24, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Hi Shyann. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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September 10, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Thank you so very much!
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August 22, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Hello Shyann, once again, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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September 10, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, I admire your kindness!
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August 13, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Shyann WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Lawrence Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, I look forward to writing more poems on here!
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August 13, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Shyann, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Lawrence Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 6:26 AM
Thank you for your praise!
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August 12, 2015 at 1:24 PM
WOW dark and sad at the same time very, very, very nice writing. I want to read more!!! LOL if you get a chance stop pass and check out my writing and I hope it has that wow factor also. I think you might enjoy Moon Light. I hope you have a great day!!
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September 10, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thank you for your admiration for my poem!
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