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Deaths Love

Deaths Love The story of love that was never supposed to unfold Is the saddest story to ever behold For Death was never suppose to love But their was an angel above Her angel lips was a sight Death desired But would never acquire She was so beautiful that the sky lit up around her Deaths day would go by in a blur Soon Deaths job was forgotten Which left no one to rotten Death would wait forever just to be with his angel Though the love would be fatal After no one died for a year the angel confronted Death Death had to take a large breath Then he told the angel about how he loved her She told him that the love would never exist and to forget them together Saddened Death began to murder All the innocent which lead to him becoming a monster The angel he loved was the only one who could save him Which lead to the angel to sit on a broken limb Now Death was left without a head The angel was kicked out of Heaven and left on a deathbed And when she was close to dying she could hear Death cry Which she could only say goodbye And as she took one final breath Death realized he was the one to cause her death So he said goodbye to the world and he could only decide To commit the worse crime that was suicide

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Date: 8/25/2015 11:20:00 PM
Shyann, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thank you very much!
Date: 8/25/2015 6:47:00 PM
Intriguing write, congratulations
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:21:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 8/25/2015 2:59:00 AM
Wow what a splendid write Shyann! Congrats on big win!
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:21:00 AM
I appreciate it!
Date: 8/24/2015 10:57:00 PM
Hi Shyann. Congratulations on your sweet Romantic WIN... SKAT
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so very much!
Date: 8/22/2015 11:58:00 PM
Hello Shyann, once again, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the homepage. **SKAT**
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, I admire your kindness!
Date: 8/13/2015 6:30:00 PM
Shyann WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:23:00 AM
Thank you, I look forward to writing more poems on here!
Date: 8/13/2015 1:10:00 AM
Shyann, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thank you for your praise!
Date: 8/12/2015 1:24:00 PM
WOW dark and sad at the same time very, very, very nice writing. I want to read more!!! LOL if you get a chance stop pass and check out my writing and I hope it has that wow factor also. I think you might enjoy Moon Light. I hope you have a great day!!
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Shyann Lawrence
Date: 9/10/2021 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for your admiration for my poem!

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