Death's Door

Death is a time where people will never breathe
We can’t talk or walk and even squawk about our lives that we lead 

What do you suppose is behind deaths door?
I’m just wondering, because eventually is going to come to us all
Should we be scare? Or fight for it, not to happen? Or just let it be?
Has anyone thought about Death, like me?
 
Death has come for two people I had a chance to know on, 02/02/12; 
however, this was a week ago. 
Do you think they knew?

Some people may not know, when it’s time for them to go,
therefore; we should ask JESUS CHIRST to come into our lives
and be prepared for that day 

So, when death wants to knock on our door 
We can open it up and say I’m ready, let’s go, 
and see that place called Heaven’s Tour

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/21/2012 8:36:00 PM
Maxeen,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 2/15/2012 1:01:00 PM
Sorry for your loss. Spiritual. It simply comes when it will. We can't change what is... It's always better to just work to accept what is... Loved your write!
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 2/18/2012 12:59:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 2/13/2012 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful spiritual piece, my friend
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Maxeen Dennis
Date: 2/14/2012 9:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/13/2012 4:36:00 AM
I agree with Lisa, in GOD hands to leave is better. I have a poem called Grim Reaper that also discusses this subject so well... Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/12/2012 10:17:00 AM
perhaps death is not for us to understand, but to leave it in God's hand. lovely write.
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