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Death's Denial

Hollow eyes gaze emptily trapped behind times window in a futureless past He is not gone yet I grieve Lost, he wanders in the labyrinth of elusive memories He is not gone yet I grieve Reaching to touch a fading sunset alone He is not gone yet I grieve As the light flickers he struggles in death’s infancy He is not gone yet I grieve ©7/5/2018 for Fragmented Verse Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/11/2018 12:08:00 AM
Horribly sad, beautifully told!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:34:00 AM
sort of the catharsis of poetry allowing me to come to terms with my vicious feelings on the situation.
Date: 7/10/2018 3:45:00 PM
the repetition of the line he is not gone yet I grieve sets the tone of the whole write, very well done.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thanks Casarah, nice to have you back
Date: 7/10/2018 8:57:00 AM
A touching line "He is not gone yet I grieve" it means a lot...All the best John
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John Lawless
Date: 7/11/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Arturo, it is painful to watch death stalk its helpless victim

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