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Death's Coldness

the chilled wind from the dark winters night kissed me my last goodnight Walking,walking,walking was all I could do Every step I took there was a crunch from the crisp new snow that had fallen. I decided to sit underneath an old dying oak tree The cold paralyzed my lungs and froze my bones The old cold man jack frost took me away I always had wondered what death would be like The cold overcame me, and I lost the will to live It was as peaceful as a hot bubble bath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2011 2:30:00 AM
welcome to poetry soup. you are very welcome. I hope you keep writting. -Alley
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Date: 7/18/2011 5:38:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Aurora. Love, Carol
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