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Deathly Fate

Rivers of blood
pour teardrops of my soul
joyous aches sends
a heavenly bliss through 
my life
a disturbing sight brings
happy moisture to my 
eyes 
a surplus of chaos
brightens my darken skies
the monster in me has taken over
and im in no control
but i dont tobe saved
dont even try to save me
i want this disatorous life
its needed in my empty walls 
of shame and the ruins of my brain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/20/2016 11:07:00 PM
Daiton, well done. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2009 8:31:00 AM
It's good that you can write about these sad feelings, Daiton, because it sometimes helps to have such a release. I'm hoping God sends some cheer your way this holiday season. Best wishes, Carolyn
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