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Deathly fate

Rivers of blood pour teardrops of my soul joyous aches sends a heavenly bliss through my life a disturbing sight brings happy moisture to my eyes a surplus of chaos brightens my darken skies the monster in me has taken over and im in no control but i dont tobe saved dont even try to save me i want this disatorous life its needed in my empty walls of shame and the ruins of my brain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/20/2016 11:07:00 PM
Daiton, well done. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2009 8:31:00 AM
It's good that you can write about these sad feelings, Daiton, because it sometimes helps to have such a release. I'm hoping God sends some cheer your way this holiday season. Best wishes, Carolyn
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