Death Unknown

You were never suppose to leave
you were to stay and watch the amazing things I could do
you were to be there when all my dreams came through
you were to enjoy every bit of happiness I felt
That was what you were suppose to do
But now it seems like what we"re suppose to do and what we do do are two unlike things
Instead you just up and left without even saying bye
Without even asking how I felt  
Without even waiting for my reply
So now am stuck in the past
Not knowing how or where I should move on to
Can you at least help me try to find my way back?
Because eventhough you left
I still want you to experience the amazing things I am going to do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 9:06 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Marii ,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Marii, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Murphy Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 1:05 PM
very nice write and welcome to poetry soup have a great weekend faleshia
Brown Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 9:11 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marii. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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