Death Spare Life Till Dawn Ii

Has my life’s essence come to pass? 
Each breath is taken to be a minute's last 
Momentary memories to an hour glass 
Are counting sands in my jagged past 
Exhausting to count in humanity's hands 
As time ticks life's melodic dance 
As the human race lead an awkward pace 
Have I outlived my life's race? 
To chase the illusion of the next stage 
Called capital; cash; chink or coinage 
The grim reaper puts these dreams sleeper 
‘Cause silence is evidence of this creeper 

Now consider, this song not as a remedy 
But a strategy to let men for tells the tragedy 
With so much life we mourn, 
Death spare life till dawn...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/27/2016 8:36:00 PM
Siza, nice win. SKAT
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/28/2016 1:38:00 AM
Thank you Skat
Date: 6/9/2016 4:42:00 PM
Wonderfully executed rhymes!! Congrats Siza, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/10/2016 3:54:00 AM
Thanks Teddy.
Date: 6/6/2016 2:07:00 PM
Wonderfully composed Siza. Congratulations on your win! #7 ; )
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/7/2016 1:43:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/5/2016 10:22:00 AM
oh, I really like this, Siza. BIG congrats. You deserved this superb win.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/6/2016 2:27:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 6/3/2016 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations Siza, well done...
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/6/2016 2:28:00 AM
Thank you Sir.
Date: 6/3/2016 10:13:00 AM
Oh I see this won in another contest too! Congratulations on your 3rd place win in my "slipping away" contest.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 6/6/2016 2:29:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/21/2016 8:37:00 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 5/23/2016 2:30:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/7/2016 11:13:00 AM
Hi Siza. Congrats for your WIN in the contest with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 5/8/2016 12:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 5/6/2016 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations Siza on the placement of the contest.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 5/8/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/21/2016 3:34:00 PM
Hi Siza, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 3/22/2016 1:19:00 AM
Thanks Vlad
Date: 9/30/2014 8:07:00 AM
Excellent work, Siza! Daniel.
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Siza Sibiya
Date: 9/30/2014 8:37:00 AM
Thank you
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