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Death Sentence

Sentenced to the death, The leaf cries at the verdict: Sap displays regret.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 6:47:00 AM
I always believe, dear Raul...you could easily win your own contest!! :)
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:31:00 AM
Great Haiku, Raúl! Death sentence is in itself a crime!...Y gracias por tus comentarios. Te deseo un buen domingo...Gert
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Date: 4/24/2010 4:30:00 AM
Thank you for the much valued honour you have given to my haiku Raul.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:56:00 AM
Interesting take on the picture...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara.....Soup Mail soon
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:48:00 PM
A fine haiku. Good luck
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:42:00 PM
Thank you Raul for considering my poem a top 10 WINNER~smiles and gratitude~~Blessings to you and yours~~~~ Rick CONGRATES TO ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:37:00 PM
A lovely twist~I like the angle~a nice ponder!! ~~Thanks for the vision!~~Rick
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:36:00 PM
Nice one, Raul, and thanks so much for including me in your winner's circle. You are inspiring so many people here! lUv, andrea
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