Death Sentence

Sentenced to the death,
The leaf cries at the verdict:
Sap displays regret.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:47 AM
I always believe, dear Raul...you could easily win your own contest!! :)
Knop Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 6:31 AM
Great Haiku, Raúl! Death sentence is in itself a crime!...Y gracias por tus comentarios. Te deseo un buen domingo...Gert
Strand Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 4:30 AM
Thank you for the much valued honour you have given to my haiku Raul.Rgds Brian
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 3:56 AM
Interesting take on the picture...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara.....Soup Mail soon
Mehta Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:48 PM
A fine haiku. Good luck
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:36 PM
Nice one, Raul, and thanks so much for including me in your winner's circle. You are inspiring so many people here! lUv, andrea
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