Death of Today

A movement of air
In the night
Barely perceptible 
To the sight

A whisper of air
The days' final breath
For the clock is ticking
The days' coming death

Last minutes fade
Till the day is history
Its death soon to come
Nevermore shall this day be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/27/2012 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:15:00 PM
this is a very interesting concept, writing just about the death of a day in time. LOVE it and congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/25/2012 2:15:00 PM
Intereresting work..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2012 12:29:00 PM
We wile away the time, often without appreciating each day that comes. A nice reminder! Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 1/25/2012 10:04:00 AM
Very profound. Congratulations Daniel
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Brian. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/25/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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