Get Your Premium Membership

Death of a Loved One

It has been 8,939 days since I last held you 24 years since I wrote a poem for others to read or view No one knows how big the hole can be in someones heart From the void that was left when a first born sons life would not restart Exactly 2 years and 24 hours to the day from which you were born Would be the start of my life long journey, in you I would forever mourn The cold spring water that did your life so swiftly take Was smooth as glass with not even a ripple or a wake As your mother and I sped to be there by your side It was less than 24 hours until in my arms you died The devastation of your loss nearly broke my will Nearly a Quarter Century later it haunts me even still The last time that I saw you alive at least was filled with joy It hurts so bad to never hear again "I wov you dad" from my baby boy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/18/2022 12:06:00 PM
A heart-wrenching feeling, beautifully written!!!
Login to Reply
Scorpio Avatar
Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/4/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank You shraddha admittedly I miss this one. Since I have not read this poem since I wrote it. Your appreciation of it though is appreciated. A.S.
Date: 10/17/2022 1:50:00 AM
Some wounds take a long time to heal and yet we must transcend, surrendering to God’s will
Login to Reply
Scorpio Avatar
Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 10/17/2022 8:39:00 AM
Very much appretiated !

Book: Shattered Sighs