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Death of a Lady Soldier

Three warriors strong, of fleeting Foot, beset by columns of night’s Thick soot, to waadi’s tears dried Long and loud, waits deadly mine With shrapnel’s shroud Rocks as mailbox, scattered Round,but no letters can be found, One foot ignites, a flash of gas, Sleeping soldier, foot of lass Her mind now scattered, poems And loves, the semblance of a Tattered glove; by lovely Face, old Troy was won, now lies Shattered, in the sun Wailing much and beating hearts, Comrades gather, fits and starts, Radio crackles, hoist at last, To the copter, goes brave lass Spirit visits mum and dad, brief Young lover, surly, sad; Valhalla Waits, brave angels’ girl; farewell Banners, rise quick, unfurl Written for Open Poetry Contest 11/7/15

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Date: 7/24/2015 2:38:00 AM
Love the way you wrote this. You must like the TV show called Hell On Wheels. About the building/ laying tracks for the continental railroad. It's on AMC = American Movie Classic channel :)
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Peter Lewis Holmes
Date: 7/24/2015 3:15:00 AM
PS..I will try and obtain a DVD of "Hell On Wheels"...best wishes...Peter.
Date: 7/11/2015 4:06:00 PM
Ex RAF and later MoD and proud to serve. A more fitting tribute I couldn't begin to imagine. Kind regards, Ian
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Date: 7/11/2015 10:44:00 AM
Peter, war and death care not for the complexity of their victims. My daughter spent 26 years in the military and carries in silence the burdens of what she experienced. Thanks for this wonderful tribute to the women who serve - and die for our freedoms.
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