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Death Note

I tried to open my eyes the vision was blur Even with the darkened clouds I could see it was her She was the same beauty she had not changed Dressed to her best she was even for meeting not arranged I couldn’t speak as such all I could do was stare Don’t know how I got the strength to smile when I saw her tear She ran into me took my hand place it upon her breast She seemed to pray inside her head upon silence you rest I tried so hard to tell I still love you even till this date I don’t blame you my dear ill curse my own fate She then cried out loud and put her lips upon my forehead It seemed that she realized my love just when I was dead Then from nowhere I got something back just to see her cry It was the happiest day of my life even I had to die Then the darkness surrounded me closing around my eye I could hear people cry wishing me goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2009 7:52:00 AM
This is something new but if ryhmes. I was looking for a happy ending like..I could hear people cry begging me life to satisfy. Pls end your poems with a spark. Wishing you all the best.
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