Death Note

I tried to open my eyes the vision was blur
Even with the darkened clouds I could see it was her
She was the same beauty she had not changed
Dressed to her best she was even for meeting not arranged
I couldn’t speak as such all I could do was stare
Don’t know how I got the strength to smile when I saw her tear
She ran into me took my hand place it upon her breast
She seemed to pray inside her head upon silence you rest
I tried so hard to tell I still love you even till this date
I don’t blame you my dear ill curse my own fate
She then cried out loud and put her lips upon my forehead
It seemed that she realized my love just when I was dead
Then from nowhere I got something back just to see her cry
It was the happiest day of my life even I had to die
Then the darkness surrounded me closing around my eye
I could hear people cry wishing me goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shahwan Avatar
May 12, 2009 at 7:52 AM
This is something new but if ryhmes. I was looking for a happy ending like..I could hear people cry begging me life to satisfy. Pls end your poems with a spark. Wishing you all the best.
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