Notes About The Poem
For: < 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Bob Carmack
July 29, 2025

Death is not our story's end

Death is not our story's end
     Far from the garden where we tend
          Flowers of love to blossom and send 
           Fragrance on the winds aloft,
     Drifting into your dreams so soft,
Bringing you back to our garden croft.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 4:34 PM
I agree with Kim. Such a rhytmic flow...and softness to your words. have a pleasant evening Sara
Achara Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 9:44 AM
Lovely rhyming, alliteration and content!
Achara Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 10:08 AM
Thank you. That means a lot to me because rhyme is difficult for me.
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