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For: < 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Bob Carmack
July 29, 2025
Death is not our story's end Far from the garden where we tend Flowers of love to blossom and send Fragrance on the winds aloft, Drifting into your dreams so soft, Bringing you back to our garden croft.

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Date: 7/30/2025 12:50:00 AM
Very beautiful!
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Date: 7/29/2025 4:34:00 PM
I agree with Kim. Such a rhytmic flow...and softness to your words. have a pleasant evening Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/29/2025 9:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/29/2025 9:44:00 AM
Lovely rhyming, alliteration and content!
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/29/2025 10:08:00 AM
Thank you. That means a lot to me because rhyme is difficult for me.

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