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Written 30  May 2025 for Point of no Return Poetry Contest Sponsored by Michael Neumann

"Point of no Return" ************************************************************** Death is a "Point of no Return" Labouring with his flagging wings to fly, Like lame lark he soars above cotton clouds During the day and night to reach the sky As with invisible wings he`s endowed; It`s his soul quitting his bodily frame That lying abed for some woeful weeks With sustained stretch of stinging pains aflame Now to part away is yearning to seek; Afflicted to very core with heart ailment Rescue has reached a point of no return, With his closest of kin torn with lament And his spouse expressing deepest concern; Half alive half dead, gazing at he sky He appears living in another world, Silent and speechless with no sigh, his eyes Dipped in some distant dreams are nearly curled. Death is implacable and knows no bound, When knells for us our final divine bell Like yellow autumn leaves we kiss the ground And to smoothen its will no tale to tell. Simple folks or monarchs, vassals or lords At their journeys` end kneel before its shrine And to cajole it just cannot afford Nor to sidestep its smashing sizzling shine Death, indeed, is a point of no return It respects neither caste nor creed nor rank And allows not to make any U- turn Nor does it permit any playful pranks.

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Date: 5/31/2025 5:24:00 AM
Our health, a funny thing. Some that seem like they will live long, die in their sleep. Some linger for a long time, even with chronic problems. Some, we know are on the edge of death. We think more about as we get to those senior year; almost 65 here (Oct). Great poem!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2025 5:05:00 AM
You are never a bother, dear one! May God bless your Sunday with the rest that gives you inertia for the coming week.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/31/2025 11:52:00 AM
I hope I am not bothering you with nonentities. Wishing you a blessed weekend filled with light of divine truth
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 5/31/2025 11:51:00 AM
Thanks a lot poet friend for appreciating the above poem. When the bell will knell for a person is already inscribed in the great Divine Book, but is unknown to us. And when we leave, nothing we will take with us, but our good deeds. Pride and vanities are vain and for a day. Our "karma" will determine our next life.....

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