Death In Green Water

I'll walk out of her
And sink into something better.
Lacerate the surface
And dream of another.
Death in green water
To dark to render.
This cold fold
Reminds me of ether.
The open night offers
A new recollection
Black secrets of breathing
Control my desire.
Death in green water
Just a stagnant reminder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 17, 2009 at 1:55 PM
dark, mysterious, secretive, I like it Tony! nice! Jim
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