Gary Fields Poet Epitaph

Death Gone Bad

To be cast into the abyss
   With-out so much
As a Spirit attached
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    Is an Obituary

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    *When you are cast into the abyss, with-out a Spirit OR Soul being  attached,
      That mean's that you are already dead!  The next step called for is to "the Obituary".


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Nick Bagnall August 23, 2011 at 8:53 AM Whilst I like the words you've chosen, the meaning of the overall poem / sentence is flawed an obituary is a notice of death, which isn't really what you are describing. An interesting piece all the same.