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Death Do Me Away

Here I lay holding out my hands My scars are visible But you know what I cant't stand? Your selfish acts kill my soul Drown me in your wants and lack of self-control For I lay here lifeless and still The way I've wanted it Just peacful and not ill For somehow I know no one will miss me But my soul is stron gnow I shall haunt thee You've only caused me torment and pain BUt soon you shall know how it feels While you hear my laughter For here i shall stay For now death can't even do me away I lay here once more Holding out my hanfdfs While you walk past with a smile and a grin But that's alright I'm able to tolerate the pain BUt soon you shall have yours coming And i will never again be afraid

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Skat A

Date: 5/30/2014 11:24:00 PM

Hi Dakota,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/30/2014 3:44:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup, Dakota. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.

Dakota Morrow

Date: 5/29/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thank you guys ^_^ this was written in a tough part of my life where I was going through emotional stress and ended up needing treatment in a mental hospital for depression and cutting. This was the output later on.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/29/2014 1:12:00 PM

Dakota, well expressed. I enjoy the strong stand against fear... well done, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2014 12:43:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dakota :) - I choose your first written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)