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Death Comes Swiftly

Look into these eyes, these eyes show no mercy Like flesh ripping off my skin, I scream I shout the names of those I do not know Like darkness I shall spread through your dreams For they will become nightmares Of which there is no return… How you will cry, but no tears will fall For you have sinned, and shall be burnt Like a thousand suns you shall feel my wrath Blood dripping from your eyes, ears and nose The wall thickens with every breath you take The truth I now expose You have smiled at death… looked into its eyes Seen the fury within the depths of his soul! To bring you pain and much suffering Is his aim, his only goal! The fear from which he feeds Is buried deep inside your mind Laying dormant, hidden from plain sight But eventually it will find you! Haunt you, and bury you alive Rip the jaws apart, gouge your eyes Peel your skin off, until you’ve bled plenty Only leading to your demise For the pain doesn’t end there It’s only about to start…. The executioner waits down below… Ready to tear you apart When you scream, the angels will but only laugh For you did not listen well You mocked them, ignored them Now in hell’s kitchen you dwell Into a pit of which there is no return No escape only much suffering to come This world varies in torture Of which none can be ran from! You will bleed endlessly… Suffer like never before…. Praying to God to take you out But he listens no more! The path you chose has lead you to fall And now your consequences you must face Now endless misery and regret For denying God’s wondrous Grace!!! Eliel202 Belize (Country)

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Date: 1/15/2011 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Felipe
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Date: 1/15/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations Felipe on your well deserved win in this contest of Deborah!-kashinath
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Date: 1/15/2011 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations Felipe to you for your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Foreign Exchange". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 8:00:00 PM
Congrats Felipe on your wonderful win in Debbie's contest with this exciting entry on your country luv.. enjoy a top ten victory and success with luv..
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:29:00 PM
Congrad's for your win with this scary verse I pray your mind finds a safer place to dwell. Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2011 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much for your entry, please put the country you are writing FROM on the bottom of your verse. Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:59:00 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Felipe. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2010 8:00:00 AM
prophetic... welcome to poetry soup!
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