Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- Death Came As a Cold Gust -

Where sorrow and silence reigns
When all words are used up

The bottomless grief
Loss gives the feeling of hopelessness

You fell asleep so quiet when the journey was over
Goodbye to nature and animals you were so fond of

We feel a emptiness, yet you are close
You were for us all so dearly loved




* In memory of a friend who died today
  Astrid, died too young







16.07.2017
(unrhymed couplets)
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Roy Pett July 23, 2017 at 5:00 AM A beautifully written tribute to your friend, Anne-Lise, sorry for your loss. Anne-Lise Andresen July 23, 2017 at 11:09 AM - Thank you very much, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise

Jean Murray July 19, 2017 at 4:50 PM So eloquent. Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2017 at 3:02 PM - Thank you very much, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise

Frederic Parker July 19, 2017 at 1:26 PM A beautiful tribute...the deepest sadness has no words to express...only comfort stays with the knowledge of having known someone where moments were shared Anne-Lise Andresen July 19, 2017 at 3:08 PM - Thank you very much, Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise

Joanna Daniel July 18, 2017 at 5:12 AM A beautiful touching tribute, Anne-lise:) my heartfelt condolences. Anne-Lise Andresen July 18, 2017 at 8:28 AM - Thank you very much, Jo - hugs // Anne-Lise

M. L. Kiser July 17, 2017 at 1:31 PM A beautiful sentiment for an obviously special friend; I' sorry to hear of her passing. Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 2:38 PM - Thank you very much, M.L. - hugs // Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels July 17, 2017 at 7:22 AM Beautiful tribute Anne-Lise... So sorry for your loss xx hugs W Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 2:38 PM - Thank you very much, Wilma - hugs // Anne-Lise

Maria Williams July 17, 2017 at 6:56 AM I am so sorry for your loss Anne-Lise. What a lovely tribute you have made for your young friend. This is terribly sad...Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 7:12 AM - Thank you very much, Maria - hugs // Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey July 17, 2017 at 6:27 AM What a tremendous poem for your deceased friend! This person would have loved reading this dedication! What a sentimental piece with lovely imagery included therein! Great Work Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 6:50 AM - Thank you very much, Russell - hugs // Anne-Lise

Joseph May July 17, 2017 at 6:25 AM A beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your friend Anne....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 6:27 AM - Thank you very much, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise

Ravi Sathasivam July 17, 2017 at 1:08 AM Very touching and heartfelt write. May his soul rest in peace. Anne-Lise Andresen July 17, 2017 at 2:51 AM - Thank you very much, Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud July 16, 2017 at 2:26 PM beautiful and heartfelt... though sad, this is a graceful work, anne..my deep condolences.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you very much, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise

Jan Allison July 16, 2017 at 12:21 PM aww Anne Lise a very touching write my thoughts are with you. I have funerals to attend this week, one of them is for an ex student he was just just (:-( hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Thank you very much, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise

Probir Gupta July 16, 2017 at 9:58 AM We pass away ... Associations continue ... inexorable ... Touching write ... Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 10:18 AM - Thank you very much, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise

Silent One July 16, 2017 at 9:06 AM Always sad when we lose a friend. Memories always remain though. Touching poem my friend.. Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 9:07 AM - Thank you very much, S.O. - hugs // Anne-Lise

Demetrios Trifiatis July 16, 2017 at 8:29 AM A touching and moving writing for the departed dear friend, Anne-Lise! As my condolence I offer you this verse of mine written some two years ago! " Death is a celestial pillow upon which the soul rests for a while dreaming of the life to come." Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 8:33 AM - Many thanks for comforting words in your verse, dear friend Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise

Heidi Sands July 16, 2017 at 8:09 AM Loss is so hard. This couplet is nice and your writing will help. Bless you Sunshine :) Anne-Lise Andresen July 16, 2017 at 8:34 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi - hugs // Anne-Lise