Death Bed Poetry: Nikola Tesla

The room hums with invisible prayers—
blue sparks dancing like ghosts of forgotten thunder.

He dies lit by his own inventions,
a cathedral of current pulsing behind his eyes.

The pigeons wait by the window,
feathers like folded circuits of forgiveness.

He speaks to the air as if to the future,
“They will laugh first. They always do.”

Outside, the streetlights blink in silent salute,
filaments bowing in quiet understanding.

Greatness flickers, then steadies—
not extinguished, but absorbed
into the bright machinery of night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Chundury Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 8:22 AM
Thank you so much for the feedback, Mr. Rodgers. I am honored to get 6th place in your contest!
Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Hello Rishi, Congrats on placing 6th in my contest. Beautifully composed elegy, elegiac in tone, yet electric in execution. The metaphors are tightly wound, each one connected with Tesla’s legacy of brilliance and isolation. I especially admired how you rendered technology as sanctuary and requiem. It’s a fitting tribute to a mind that saw light not just as invention, but as prophecy. Autumn Blessings, Rishi, Daniel
Agustin Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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