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Written 18/10/2025 for a contest

Death bed poetry contest

“Give me my glasses”…..
Mark Twain (Samuel Langhorne Clemens)
aged 74 who immediately after died of a heart attack

There it comes and here I go
the Halley’s comet streaming past 
millennium's of existence,
glowing in the dark skies above
Mississippi, like the day it did when
I was born. Stories, fables and laughs
and all! Now it is my final call! The comet waits
with its chariot of haze and glows, but it
has room for just one more,
I shall journey with it past the galaxies,
for millions of years, through eternity, before I get
another call- to be something that nature
may choose. Right now just give me the glasses,
so I can survey the skies for my travel pass,
to re-enter that domain of eternal preservation,
leaving my mortal cask to merge with earth,
but my heart shall resonate with Tom and Huckle,
their joys and pranks worth a chuckle,
while I make my way to the stellar state,
and in there, no life, no death, no fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 7:07 AM
Dear Krish, Congrats on taking 4th in my contest. This is a richly imagined farewell elegiac in tone, yet expansive in vision. The alignment of Twain’s final moment with Halley’s comet creates a mythic frame, and you’ve filled it with both reverence and play. It’s a fitting tribute to a voice that never stopped observing, laughing, and wondering. Autumn Blessings, Krish, Daniel
Radhakrishna Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Daniel! Honoured!! Great idea for a contest! Congratulations on coming up with such a lovely idea! Glad you like my poetry! Mark Twain is one of my life’s inspirations!
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