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Death Bed

An old house, ancient in its fearsome style Where lightning flashes and thunder pelts near The house’s creepiness can be seen for miles In front of the building is a dark seer Casting powers that cause a lot of fear A witch flies deep in the sky overhead Looking for lost victims to kill them dead Moon shines above to cast eerie shadows Glowing on those lying on a death bed The scary scene brings fear like no-one knows
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/2/2013 1:14:00 PM
beautifully penned russell
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Date: 10/1/2013 10:12:00 AM
russell, goosebumps.. will you allow me to sleep soundly, at the very least, lol!.. creepy, wicked, astonishing... you rule once more!.:) huggs
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:25:00 AM
You really excel in writing different poems of different forms my dear friend Russell. Two thumbs up! You did dizain very well. Dizain, rispetto etc... are forms of poems I've never tried yet. Hope I've enough time to try them next time. Another thing you are very good at also is writing stellar scary poems. You can have great book of these poems already ;)). Well, best wishes to u always & thank you so much for everything, your poetry & your time on my work! Big hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:15:00 PM
Tell where its located and I won't go there..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/29/2013 12:05:00 AM
Very dark and fearsome poem, Russell
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:43:00 PM
Russell; You sure have a knack for writing scary poems. I enjoyed it, but a death bed is pretty scary. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla I hope you are feeling better.
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:06:00 PM
great title for your eerie Halloween poem, my friend. Just 33 days or so to go!!
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