Death and Life

Grass smoke makes me sneeze
Torrent blaze killing old trees
From ash grow new trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 21, 2011 at 10:44 AM
wow! the re-birth... thanks for the haiku,,, of all over again,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 10:56 PM
I like that great postiive last line!
Mehta Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 1:07 PM
I relate to this, Robb. India's greatest religious epic The GITA gives the same message, Life begets life.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 9, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Truth be told Robb.. from the ashes arise new life.. many fires burning now ... great title luv..
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