Death

Cemetery grave Patiently waiting to feed mourners now crying Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2018 8:50:00 AM

Wow! You definitely spin a great haiku, my friend! We shall all find the grave. Some want to believe they can escape but none do. Blessings, Carlos!

Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/30/2018 11:51:00 AM

Thanks Kim. Have been reading your writes and I have to say the way you look at life is refreshing.

Beejadhur Sewumber

Date: 1/29/2018 10:58:00 PM

My friend, Death and Life struggle to prove who is stronger. Death is always the winner. Well written,my friend. Cemetery is insatiable, always hungry. I like that.

Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/30/2018 8:08:00 AM

I will feed death and hope i will be to his liken. Thank you Beejadhur.

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/28/2018 10:08:00 PM

Truth in so few words. Very nice Carlos!

Lunita Blanca
Date: 1/29/2018 3:31:00 PM

The Shadow knows. Thank you.