Death

Cemetery grave 
   Patiently waiting to feed
       mourners now crying


    Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated

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Kim Rodrigues

January 30, 2018 at 8:50 AM

Wow! You definitely spin a great haiku, my friend! We shall all find the grave. Some want to believe they can escape but none do. Blessings, Carlos!

Lunita Blanca

January 30, 2018 at 11:51 AM

Thanks Kim. Have been reading your writes and I have to say the way you look at life is refreshing.

Beejadhur Sewumber

January 29, 2018 at 10:58 PM

My friend, Death and Life struggle to prove who is stronger. Death is always the winner. Well written,my friend. Cemetery is insatiable, always hungry. I like that.

Lunita Blanca

January 30, 2018 at 8:08 AM

I will feed death and hope i will be to his liken. Thank you Beejadhur.