Death

death painful breaks my heart took my friends away sad
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Shahein Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:16 PM
Yes it's painful , you've just described my pain , I've lost my friend recently by cancer , very true words , hugs / / :) dalia
Sietesantos Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:39 AM
This sad piece really tugged at my heart especially since I have lost so many loved ones. What an excellent Lanterne, however, that in so few but effective words artfully described the loss that comes with death of a cherished one. Great write. Pandita
Johnson Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Death seems so final, but contact remains, thoughts of survival, in spirit reclaim...
Rodgers Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:41 PM
Poignant. Welcome to the Soup.
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:40 PM
tanks dave
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Short poem but with deep and strong words my friend , enjoyed reading it, hugs / / :) dalia
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:28 PM
tanks Dalia
Sage Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:47 PM
a nice write there, excellent
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:32 PM
tanks alot bro
Callus Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:41 PM
A well executed lantern; expressive in so few words. You are not green to poetry writing, as I can decipher after having read all four poems of yours. ~ regards // paul
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Tanks alot.....i hope to learn nd develop more nd more....tanks once again
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