Get Your Premium Membership

death

death painful breaks my heart took my friends away sad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 1/20/2016 9:16:00 PM
Yes it's painful , you've just described my pain , I've lost my friend recently by cancer , very true words , hugs / / :) dalia
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2016 11:39:00 AM
This sad piece really tugged at my heart especially since I have lost so many loved ones. What an excellent Lanterne, however, that in so few but effective words artfully described the loss that comes with death of a cherished one. Great write. Pandita
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2016 5:14:00 PM
Death seems so final, but contact remains, thoughts of survival, in spirit reclaim...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2016 2:33:00 AM
very moving - you are a great addition to soup
Login to Reply
LEGEND Avatar
LEGENDARY LEGEND
Date: 1/8/2016 3:04:00 AM
tanks alot
Date: 1/7/2016 4:41:00 PM
Poignant. Welcome to the Soup.
Login to Reply
LEGEND Avatar
LEGENDARY LEGEND
Date: 1/7/2016 5:40:00 PM
tanks dave
Date: 1/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
Short poem but with deep and strong words my friend , enjoyed reading it, hugs / / :) dalia
Login to Reply
LEGEND Avatar
LEGENDARY LEGEND
Date: 1/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
tanks Dalia
Date: 1/7/2016 3:47:00 PM
a nice write there, excellent
Login to Reply
LEGEND Avatar
LEGENDARY LEGEND
Date: 1/7/2016 4:32:00 PM
tanks alot bro
Date: 1/7/2016 2:41:00 PM
A well executed lantern; expressive in so few words. You are not green to poetry writing, as I can decipher after having read all four poems of yours. ~ regards // paul
Login to Reply
LEGEND Avatar
LEGENDARY LEGEND
Date: 1/7/2016 2:45:00 PM
Tanks alot.....i hope to learn nd develop more nd more....tanks once again