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death painful breaks my heart took my friends away sad

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Date: 1/20/2016 9:16:00 PM
Yes it's painful , you've just described my pain , I've lost my friend recently by cancer , very true words , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:39:00 AM
This sad piece really tugged at my heart especially since I have lost so many loved ones. What an excellent Lanterne, however, that in so few but effective words artfully described the loss that comes with death of a cherished one. Great write. Pandita
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:14:00 PM
Death seems so final, but contact remains, thoughts of survival, in spirit reclaim...
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:41:00 PM
Poignant. Welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:40:00 PM
tanks dave
Date: 1/7/2016 4:23:00 PM
Short poem but with deep and strong words my friend , enjoyed reading it, hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:28:00 PM
tanks Dalia
Date: 1/7/2016 3:47:00 PM
a nice write there, excellent
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:32:00 PM
tanks alot bro
Date: 1/7/2016 2:41:00 PM
A well executed lantern; expressive in so few words. You are not green to poetry writing, as I can decipher after having read all four poems of yours. ~ regards // paul
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:45:00 PM
Tanks alot.....i hope to learn nd develop more nd more....tanks once again