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Death

Death, So painful yet so real, Robbing us of love and hopes alike Do we need wish for more? Than to just wish you away? Of my grandpa is gone And so the tales too All because you wanted more Me ask when less you will take For now for then, its grief you breed If only I had the power bereft To destroy you away I would For the sorrow you left me I cry And my dear heart you tore No mercy for you would I feel And clear my conscience would be To say I hate would be An understatement and a blatant lie Forever gone and lost. Death, How I wish you were a tree So that I would cut you down And feed you to the fiery furnace That you may feel the scorching pain That I too had to pass. How bad I wish you would go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/12/2013 11:15:00 PM
I like your poem Timothy-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/12/2013 4:47:00 PM
Hey Timothy , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/12/2013 6:58:00 AM
- Hi Timothy, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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