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Death

If I were to die today...Would you miss me? If I were to leave this Earth...How would you feel? How could you feel? You wouldn't. You just don't care. You never have. You never will. You hated me. You hate my life. To you, I was nothing. I am nothing. Your soul screamed out to me. Help please, I need you. I answered its call and in the end got hurt in the fire behind the fake smile. Your heart just cryed out for someone. Someone who could heal your pain. Somone to calm your spirit and make your mind set itself free. But what about me? What about my soul? My shattered and broken heart? My love and my passions? I just want to know...Why don't you care? Who do you love? What do you want?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 6:02:00 PM
Jennie, a very deep deep poem... thanks for the thoughts...p.d.
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Date: 11/25/2011 6:02:00 PM
Very touching poem. I wish the addressee to respond to it in a positive manner. I wish your wounds to heal and happiness to knock at your doors. Please open the door when it does. -Mohammad
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