Death

Death indifferent, stone-cold unyielding, fixating, remaining crows, graves, birdsong, everlasting mirth opening, understanding, finding emotional, joyful life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Esquire Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 8:35 PM
Dear Laura,Start with Death and end with Life, Superb Diamante, YOUR POETRY Knowledge is Stunning LOVE YOU, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 11:22 PM
Excellent theme, Laura . Well done!!
Mehta Avatar
November 21, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Perfect one on life and death, Laura
Peranteau Avatar
November 19, 2011 at 5:11 AM
You have shown here dear poet, your experience with death, and your attention to it Laura. Great Diamante my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
Effendi Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 9:19 PM
Death is sad as iti is, madame. Great description.
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 11:06 PM
I really like yours and the way you started with death instead of ending with it!!
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November 16, 2011 at 9:06 PM
Laura, you have every word that gives me the hibbe jibbes.... truly enjoyed your poem.. Nice form, by the way... But, as far as death..i still don't understand it... and yes...life comes after death.... enjoyed,..p.d.
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