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Death

Death indifferent, stone-cold unyielding, fixating, remaining crows, graves, birdsong, everlasting mirth opening, understanding, finding emotional, joyful life

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/25/2012 8:35:00 PM

Dear Laura,Start with Death and end with Life, Superb Diamante, YOUR POETRY Knowledge is Stunning LOVE YOU, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2011 11:22:00 PM

Excellent theme, Laura . Well done!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2011 6:38:00 PM

Perfect one on life and death, Laura

James Peranteau

Date: 11/19/2011 5:11:00 AM

You have shown here dear poet, your experience with death, and your attention to it Laura. Great Diamante my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 11/18/2011 9:19:00 PM

Death is sad as iti is, madame. Great description.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 11:06:00 PM

I really like yours and the way you started with death instead of ending with it!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 9:06:00 PM

Laura, you have every word that gives me the hibbe jibbes.... truly enjoyed your poem.. Nice form, by the way... But, as far as death..i still don't understand it... and yes...life comes after death.... enjoyed,..p.d.