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Death indifferent, stone-cold unyielding, fixating, remaining crows, graves, birdsong, everlasting mirth opening, understanding, finding emotional, joyful life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/25/2012 8:35:00 PM
Dear Laura,Start with Death and end with Life, Superb Diamante, YOUR POETRY Knowledge is Stunning LOVE YOU, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/21/2011 11:22:00 PM
Excellent theme, Laura . Well done!!
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Date: 11/21/2011 6:38:00 PM
Perfect one on life and death, Laura
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Date: 11/19/2011 5:11:00 AM
You have shown here dear poet, your experience with death, and your attention to it Laura. Great Diamante my friend ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:19:00 PM
Death is sad as iti is, madame. Great description.
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Date: 11/17/2011 11:06:00 PM
I really like yours and the way you started with death instead of ending with it!!
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Date: 11/16/2011 9:06:00 PM
Laura, you have every word that gives me the hibbe jibbes.... truly enjoyed your poem.. Nice form, by the way... But, as far as death..i still don't understand it... and comes after death.... enjoyed,..p.d.
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