Death

with one last look at her children and grandchildren she went to her parents

Jack Horne, 8th September, for Constance’s Write it in one line contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 2:55 PM
I missed this one..Congrats on your win.Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Ramsdale Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 4:53 PM
placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR
Poet Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 1:06 PM
Congrats jack on your 1st place win...a touching write.
Beadnall Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Congrats Jack a fine win,mate bleesings Paul.
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Jack. Love, Carol
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your first place win!!!!!!!!!
Devonshire Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 3:49 AM
You said so much in just one line, Jack. Congratulations on your big win! So happy for you, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 3:08 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,jack
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 11:56 PM
CONGRATS JACK ON FIRST PLACE WIN LUV.. HONORED TO SHARE WITH U...
Ramage Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 9:34 PM
How true, well done. Lee
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 8:02 PM
Wow is that powerful Jack-congrats to you!
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Very good Monoku here jack...enjoyed reading it.Best wishes.
Onclaud Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 12:56 PM
poignant write, jack.. winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
Sivey Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 11:26 AM
I got the chills reading this one! Great work!! Good luck in the contest!!
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