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Death

Know not when you sleep
             sleep is bliss so is death
                      Discern not when you die



First time I write Haiku.
Suresh M Iyer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/15/2010 9:00:00 PM
Very interesting and thought provoking, Suresh. NIcely done for first time! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:20:00 PM
The poet Blake has said in his poem that death is nothing but slumber. Suresh
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:25:00 PM
Really like the wisdom behind this haiku, Suresh. It would fall into the "modern haiku" category where you don't have to use a 5-7-5 syllable scheme. Well done, especially for a first effort! Love and blessings, Carolyn
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