Death

oh awful you are
coming like a wail wind
pretending to be helpful
come and steal my love away

deathsong-sorryi do not know?

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Beata Agustin

November 18, 2024 at 5:07 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 6, 2016 at 2:22 PM

David,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

January 7, 2016 at 7:09 PM

David, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**

Susan Palli

December 12, 2010 at 1:53 AM

So true! good write. ( reading Revelation 21:4 helps to cope because if says that death will be no more in the future.)

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 5:07 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup David. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol