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Death

When you die your soul might go up to the sky Or you might here satin's bells calling for you to live your life in hell When you reach up above the sky,you find yourself sitting on a cloud you look around you and you start having doubts whether the gates of your eternity will open whether it's in paradise called heaven or in hell as hot as an oven you find the angels and the pure souls wondering around,playing their beautiful tunes you look under you,you find the devils and the dirty souls suffering in battles of duels at the end all you can do is wait till the angel of death comes and tells you it is the end .

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Date: 4/30/2025 11:46:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/23/2016 11:03:00 PM
NATALIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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