Death

When you die
your soul might go up to the sky 

Or you might here satin's bells 
calling for you to live your life in hell

When you reach up above the sky,you find yourself sitting on a cloud
you look around you and you start having doubts

whether the gates of your eternity will open
whether it's in paradise called heaven or in hell as hot as an oven

you find the angels and the pure souls wondering around,playing their beautiful 
tunes
you look under you,you find the devils and the dirty souls suffering in battles of 
duels

at the end all you can do is wait till the angel of death comes and tells you it is the 
end .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Agustin Avatar
April 30, 2025 at 11:46 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 23, 2016 at 11:03 PM
NATALIE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
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