Dearest Lord

Dearest Lord:  Take away this pain inside and help your Love to be my quide, 
for all along lifes roads I see pain and suffering all in front of me,
I will take your hand and fight though each day seems like night, 
your Love will walk in front of me and clear the darkness for me to see, 
I will abide by your rules Dearest Lord for those are our stronget tools 
to Love and Cherish each ALONE as special beings from your own, 
as I walk through this evil Lord place in my hand your righteous sword, 
Made out of love and tenderness so I can do my very best.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/13/2009 4:52:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Lucy. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors.I hope you will be joining us as a premium member here at the site. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2009 4:38:00 PM
A worthy request, Iam sure it was heard of the Lord, God bless, keep writing, to release your pain thru Mourning. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/12/2009 3:37:00 PM
Lovely work Lucy, welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 12:41:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Lucy. This is a beautiful prayer. Indeed, there is pain and suffering all along the road of life, but with the Lord's help, somehow we make it through and, if lucky, find love and tenderness. I admire your the faith you express in this inspirational poem. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:21:00 AM
Hey Lucy, I love the flow of words and thoughts in this poem. you must have been inspired by God to write this, I hope all your request is granted. Please keep writing you are great! Welcome to poetrysoup. You will have fun and learn from great writers. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:00:00 AM
nicely done, hope your prayers are answered.
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