Notes About The Poem

Dear Youngin'

Life could be over in just a split second, don't live it 
        dangerously, and don't take it for granted; 

      make the most out it while you're still young!
      Take flight and let no one pull you back down. 

   Steer clear of bad influences, and keep looking for 
     the blueprint to built yourself the perfect dream!



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Bite Size Poem 3 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
05/30/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Very Beautiful Message. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Thanks for the visit and congratulations, Christuraj!:-)
Kauffman Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Too often our youth think they are bulletproof! Great wisdom for them in your words. And a great reminder to all of us not to squander the precious time we have been given! Congrats and high fives for your win!
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Thank you so very much, Sam:-) It's always a pleasure to hear from you, my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 5:03 PM
Awesome message, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Thank you, Andrea:-)
Kelly Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Great advice, Edward. We should all be our own muses :) - Ruby.
Ibeh Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Thank you so much, Ruby:-)
Daniel Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Great advice, Edward:)
Ibeh Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Thank you very much, Jo:-)
Pandit Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 4:25 AM
Great advice, Edward. Perfect ending line.
Ibeh Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thank you very much indeed, Vijay:-) Blessings, my friend.
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