Dear Younger Me

Growing up brings some drastic change
makes it hard to breathe like a cracked rib cage
life becomes filled with lasting pains
everything seems vague at this stage
people become complex not even Patrick Jane 
can read them
you think growing up means more freedom 
but it’s quite the opposite
more responsibilities and it’s pretty hard to get
rid of old habits and passed old vision of things 
problems pile up and you’re given no time to think

You're probably having problems with bae
just hit pause for some days, take a little break
ignore the "I should've's/she should've's" games
just try to work it out no matter whose fault it is
better days are yet to come, just be optimistic

Don't do anything stupid, please wait
just wait, you've waited enough
it's so close, please don't give up
I know how you feel, it's too much
you probably think this is nonsense
but it's going to be fine, I promise



11/1/2015
ELIS ARTIS

For the contest, Any Poem, sponsor, Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/28/2015 1:44:00 PM
Nice win
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Date: 11/27/2015 7:49:00 AM
I'm glad to see this one on the winners list! Congratulations.
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Elis Artis
Date: 12/2/2015 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Richard:) I appreciate it
Date: 11/26/2015 3:42:00 AM
Congrats on ur win with this lovely poem Elis.. great work!
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Elis! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/10/2015 12:02:00 PM
nice win
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/10/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 11/8/2015 10:23:00 PM
Superb win Elis with this awesome write... big congrats!
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/9/2015 8:25:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. Upma:) I really appreciate that
Date: 11/8/2015 9:38:00 AM
Elis, nice write from a little different perspective.
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Date: 11/9/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate that
Date: 11/7/2015 7:40:00 PM
Elis, you penned some good sound advice. I enjoyed the honest approach that you gave to your younger self.Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Thanks for participating in my contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/7/2015 8:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, it's been a pleasure! I'm looking forward to participating in your future contests:) Thank you for stopping by:)
Date: 11/7/2015 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations in your win.
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/7/2015 7:38:00 PM
Thank you so much:)
Date: 11/7/2015 4:24:00 PM
Ellis, nice win. SKAT
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/7/2015 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Skat:) I appreciate that
Date: 11/6/2015 10:59:00 PM
Nice words to your younger self. Some of those mistakes and anxieties made you who you are today, and to be able to write words like these, that makes you pretty great. Well done.
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Date: 11/7/2015 12:23:00 PM
Truuuue! What we go through is what makes us who we are. Thank you so much, dear scott for stopping by:) I really appreciate that
Date: 11/6/2015 12:57:00 PM
Hello Elis!! You commented on one of my poems and so I thought I would drop by to check out your site. By the way, it looks like your really new to Poetry Soup. On that note, I would like to welcome you to our site and the poetry association!! About your poem: First, Good Luck in the Contest!! Second, Growing up is a very tough experience at times. Your very positive attitude shines through here!! Third, Very Well-Done!! A "7"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/7/2015 12:16:00 PM
You're right, it's indeed a tough experience. Thank you so much, dear Gary for stopping by and commenting on this piece:)
Date: 11/5/2015 11:01:00 AM
We do try to encourage our younger ones with advice which has been gained through the years; we would prefer it were they not to repeat the same mistakes which we made! ~ A good poem with sense; well presented. gl in the contest. // paul
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Elis Artis
Date: 11/5/2015 6:20:00 PM
Exactly:) Thank you so much for stopping by:)
Date: 11/4/2015 10:48:00 PM
oh how true this is, being a kid you never really think about the responsibility that comes with being an adult, thank you for sharing ~Luv Linda
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Date: 11/5/2015 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much for stopping by, dear Linda:)
Date: 11/4/2015 8:03:00 PM
Nicely done, Elis! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/5/2015 6:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Andrea:) I appreciate that
Date: 11/2/2015 7:48:00 AM
This is one of your best Elis!
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Date: 11/3/2015 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Richard:) I appreciate that
Date: 11/1/2015 10:13:00 PM
Love the positive attitude in your poem. Wise words said. Welcome to ps.
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Date: 11/3/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Charmaine:) God bless you and keep you safe
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