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Dear Teddy Bear, My Teddy Bear

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Dear Teddy Bear, My Teddy Bear I keep you with me night and day, Amazing how you always play. When it is time to take my nap You rest with me right in my lap. You are my bestest furry friend! May our sweet friendship never end. I know you love me and you care Dear Teddy bear, my Teddy bear. 5-8-19 Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Poetry Contest Sponsor Eve Roper picture #1

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/20/2019 11:23:00 PM

One can never really outgrow the need for a good friend or just something soft to hug... This precious poem brings back some nice childhood memories for me... Wonderful work Connie! Good luck in the contest!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/19/2019 7:31:00 PM

Hello Connie ... wonderful verse to share with a child holding a teddy bear - thank you Connie - Lindsay

Jean Murray

Date: 5/13/2019 5:16:00 PM

"My bestest friend" brings me right back Connie. Just lovely. Well done to you too.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/13/2019 7:57:00 PM

Thank you Jean. Children really love their stuffed animals and give them an almost sentient personality. My poem was twice as long and I had to cut it down for the contest. : ) xxoo

Paul Callus

Date: 5/13/2019 2:47:00 PM

A really sweet poem which should delight both young and grownups! This should also appeal to the sponsor of this contest. Best regards // paul

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/13/2019 9:01:00 AM

Made me all smiley. This is something I can relate to as a child and as a Mother - that attachment to a special thing. So sweet. Congrats on your placement. Love ... CayCay

Joseph May

Date: 5/12/2019 6:58:00 PM

Lovely write and win Connie...Congrats..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2019 1:40:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Connie :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 5/10/2019 11:45:00 PM

This is so tender. Years ago, I got my wife a little one, not knowing how in her 50s she’d react. Tears came to her eyes, as she cuddled it and placed it neatly on the bed. Thanks for summoning these heartfelt memories.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2019 12:09:00 PM

Oh WOW Connie this is cuter than cuter and sweeter than sweet! I LOVE it - I have my teddy bear still which my mom kept for me and I have in our bedroom - he only has one eye, his fur is half gone but he/she looks at me so lovingly! Holding thumbs! Hugs, Jennifer.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 5/10/2019 7:38:00 AM

That's so cute, Connie. I enjoyed it.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/9/2019 10:11:00 PM

The tender innocence of your lovey poem is endearing and heartwarming, Connie. Beautifully done! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my wonderful friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2019 6:17:00 PM

ah, I think we were thinking along the same lines with this one!!! It's the Taurus in me thinking like you!! Adorable.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 6:48:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. The other pictures brought zero ideas to be inspired enough to write a poem about. Here is wishing us luck. : ) xxoo

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 5/9/2019 5:47:00 PM

You should post the unabridged version if you saved it. This is sweet.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 5:49:00 PM

I can post it after the contest is awarded. Thank you for that suggestion Jerry. : )

Jack Horne

Date: 5/9/2019 2:29:00 PM

awww, love this sweet write - i loved my teddy bear, Bungo : )

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 5:20:00 PM

Thank you Jack. My son had a little dog puppet....I think he may still have. My daughters had Teddy bears. My granddaughter now sleeps with her mother's large bear when she is here. : ) xxoo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/9/2019 1:24:00 PM

childhood is not complete without our huggy teddy bear, connie... i am charmed by your affectionate write!... huggs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 5:17:00 PM

Thank you Nette. My poem was twice as long but then I read it was limited to only eight lines. : ) xxoo

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/9/2019 7:53:00 AM

A sincere ode to the teddy bear, Connie! Did you know that Elvis Presley had his own teddy bear based on his song?

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 10:10:00 AM

No, I didn't, but it doesn't surprise me. He was the beloved only child whose twin died at birth so he was even more treasured by his parents. Thank you Ralph. xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/9/2019 7:06:00 AM

Enjoyed the sweet tone and rhythm of your poem Connie..your words spell the thoughts in his mind beautifully..excellent write..a sure win.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 10:12:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. My poem was twice as long until I read the rules before posting and had to trim it down to enter it. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2019 4:17:00 AM

- Oh .... so sweet ... winner wishes to you, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 4:30:00 AM

Thank you very much Anne-Lise. I had to cut my poem in half as I made it too long after re-reading the directions. : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/9/2019 4:14:00 AM

Well that took me right back Connie, I remember the one I had was blue, he was around for years, not sure where he ended up though. Good luck. Tom

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 4:29:00 AM

I saved the Teddy bears for my daughters and a little pup puppet for my son. They were grateful. Thank you Tom. : )

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/9/2019 3:34:00 AM

How cute, good luck in the contest!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 4:28:00 AM

Thank you M.L. When my oldest daughter was a teen she told me to throw her teddy bear away. I reminded her years later and she was horrified and asked did I do it? I said no, I saved it and she was so happy. Haha. : )

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/9/2019 2:12:00 AM

A sweet innocence prevails here, Connie. All the best in Eve's contest.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/9/2019 3:20:00 AM

Thank you Caren. My poem was twice as long, then I realized I had to drop four lines to enter the contest. This is a poem I can share with my seven year old granddaughters. : ) xxoo