Pintu Mahakul Poet Rhyme

Dear Super Friend

Dear super friend of mine you feel
Everywhere I feel you improve zeal.
Heal my ill mind oh dear super light
Giving wisdom ever you do me bright.

Fight I with night of life to see a day
I know hearing me attention you pay.
I pray and urge you within devotion, 
You observe my mind within emotion.

Connection has happened in this Earth
I understand purpose of life and birth.
You show me path I mingle in you ever,
Oh dear super friend I forget you never.

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Richard Lamoureux March 19, 2017 at 8:51 AM A very uplifting first write.

Abdullah Alhemaidy January 22, 2017 at 2:57 AM Wonderful esteem!

Manmath Dalei September 16, 2016 at 12:03 PM Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love Pintu Mahakul January 15, 2017 at 6:30 PM Thank you very much for your kind feedback.

Skat A September 15, 2016 at 11:35 PM PINTU, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT Pintu Mahakul September 16, 2016 at 11:41 AM Thank you very much for reviewing this poem. I am glad finding you as new poetrysoup friend. May God bring lots of happiness for you.