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Dear Mother

Dear Mom,
you dont understand how much you hurt me,
you dont know how many tears i shed,
or the ammount of times i'm dripped blood from slits in my wrist.

I love you Mommy,
all i want to do is help, 
i'm a teenager i make misstakes
i'm sorry, Mommy, if i'm a bother
i only try to ease you burodon on raising 3 kids
i'm the middle child, Mom
i care and love
Cant you hear me, Mommy?
You have to 3 seconds to andswer
3...2...1...

My writs are bleeding, Mommy
maybe now i'll do good

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Diane Christian

Date: 12/3/2008 11:04:00 AM

anyway take care God bless you from diane

Diane Christian

Date: 12/3/2008 11:03:00 AM

aww this is so touching, I understand how you feel, my mother left home when I was 11 years old and I saw my father have a break down over it, so I know how it feels, some people used me make me feel like it was a mistake I was born but when i found God I know I was born to live for him the rest can go jump the oens that hurt me the most, even some own sisters were cruel to me, anyway thanks for your feed back on my poem the Lord is my shepherd

Nita Martin

Date: 11/13/2008 8:49:00 PM

Ok for one I am a mommy and you dont know it but she dose love you it is just as hard for your mom to understand you as it is for you to understand her take my word for it I know I have a 14 year old and a 10 year old both boys and ya'll are hard to raise I do like your pome it is very emotional and well writen but don't be to hard on your mom cause unless she is beating you or out drinking all the time it is not that she dose not love you it is she dose not know how to show you she loves you

Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/6/2008 2:16:00 PM

hey, thanks for that on dreams come true, i do what i can. lol whats up.

Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/4/2008 5:22:00 PM

just listen to music as you write poetry, it works pretty good

Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/4/2008 3:17:00 PM

i play both acoustic and electric, but currently playing the electric, the acoustics strings are a little old and out of tune.

Kyle Perkins

Date: 11/4/2008 3:12:00 PM

im good. just writing guitar tabs that come into my head right now. how bout you.

Christina Batten

Date: 10/12/2008 6:27:00 PM

I totally understand were you are coming from.You have touched my heart with this poem.I was once there,theres nothing like you feeling like your mother doesn't care.I have to many scars on my wrists and am ashamed of them now.But don't give up hunny. This is 20yrs later for me and my mother and I have the best relationship ever.Please dont give up. Christina aka lilgypsygurl

Steven Mcmorrow

Date: 10/8/2008 4:38:00 PM

this is cool. very emotional

Ali Matheny

Date: 10/2/2008 1:21:00 PM

Youre not upset though...r u..?

Ali Matheny

Date: 10/2/2008 1:13:00 PM

Can we just be friends for now...

Ali Matheny

Date: 10/1/2008 11:57:00 AM

Hello my love?

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 9/30/2008 5:38:00 AM

This was so sad. I want to cry. George's right, try to be strong. I'm sure your mother is going to be proud of you one day. Everything will be alright..just a little time is needed. You'll do good. God bless. Love Chitra

George Anos

Date: 9/29/2008 6:41:00 PM

Be strong sam! Help yourself, its hard to be happy but try to pursue this elusive feeling fervently

Katriina Boughton

Date: 9/29/2008 6:09:00 PM

Very sad but I can understand. Time does not take away pain but it does help ease it. Take care and keep writing

Ali Matheny

Date: 9/29/2008 5:26:00 PM

Sam it is sooooo sad I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!