Dear Momma

Dear Momma
I wish you were here
So I can see you and love 
Be with you when we both disappear

Dear Momma
I want us to be together
be mother and son
Our love would last forever

Dear Momma
I don't know what would happen
But iI know it would be great and luminous
Be as though the world was clapp'en

Dear Momma
I wish you didn't suffer from your dependency
Wow I just can't believe and comprehend 
How your life wouldn't fit in a diary

Dear Momma
Your spirit flows through me like energy
Your spirit lifts me up when I am down 
Felling I won't get back like a refugee

Dear Momma
I love you even with the crease
That seperates us from touch and sight
Please momma rest in peace

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/9/2009 11:12:00 AM
This touches my heart. I am soo sorry for you loss Jordan, -hugs- im glad your okay...even if its only a little...godbless hon peace, Jese
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Date: 4/7/2009 2:21:00 PM
This and "Tears" was a lot better than your others. Still, remember to spell-check though.
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Date: 4/7/2009 12:59:00 PM
Beautiful work Jordan, sad tone but uplifting in spirit...Raul
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Date: 4/3/2009 2:34:00 PM
This moved me to tears, Jordan. Beautifully written in both form and substance!
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