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Dear Mom

DEAR MOM

           ‘Dear Mom, you went to market
            leaving me alone at home. 
            Enjoyed hot bath with foam
           but had a fall: I was upset.’   
          
         ‘I am so sorry my dear son.
          You should be careful as I told,
         you are growing up strong and bold.
          Had you cried as I had gone?’
         
        ‘I was almost burst into tears  
        but controlled as you were not here.
        Who will care for me, who will hear?
       Self-help best help oblivious.’
      
       ‘My dear son, I am so sorry.
        It is my fault why have I left?
       I know for long time you have wept.
       Where have you hurt, how is injury?’
              
       ‘I did not cry, stayed cool and calm.
       Who will rush to put me in lap?
        I came out closing water tap.
         On my own applied pain balm.’       

  11/09/2019


  BRIAN'S CHOICE 3' Contest by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/5/2020 11:08:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your HM in Brian's contest, Anisha - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/6/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Gregory. Best wishes
Date: 5/5/2020 1:21:00 PM
Such a tender, intimate conversation shared between mother and son, Anisha. Beautifully portrayed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/5/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thanks Susan. Love
Date: 11/22/2019 6:54:00 AM
Beautifuly penned as in a conversation...
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/22/2019 10:17:00 PM
Thanks n Blessing
Date: 11/22/2019 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Anisha
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Date: 11/21/2019 2:37:00 AM
beautiful poem penned on the conversation between son and mom
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/21/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thanks n Blessing
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