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DEAR MOM ‘Dear Mom, you went to market leaving me alone at home. Enjoyed hot bath with foam but had a fall: I was upset.’ ‘I am so sorry my dear son. You should be careful as I told, you are growing up strong and bold. Had you cried as I had gone?’ ‘I was almost burst into tears but controlled as you were not here. Who will care for me, who will hear? Self-help best help oblivious.’ ‘My dear son, I am so sorry. It is my fault why have I left? I know for long time you have wept. Where have you hurt, how is injury?’ ‘I did not cry, stayed cool and calm. Who will rush to put me in lap? I came out closing water tap. On my own applied pain balm.’ 11/09/2019 BRIAN'S CHOICE 3' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 5/5/2020 11:08:00 PM
Happy Cinco de Mayo and sincere congratulations for your HM in Brian's contest, Anisha - keep up the great work! I hope you are staying safe and sound, My Friend - blessings! :o)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/6/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Gregory. Best wishes
Date: 5/5/2020 1:21:00 PM
Such a tender, intimate conversation shared between mother and son, Anisha. Beautifully portrayed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/5/2020 9:53:00 PM
Thanks Susan. Love
Date: 11/22/2019 6:54:00 AM
Beautifuly penned as in a conversation...
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/22/2019 10:17:00 PM
Thanks n Blessing
Date: 11/22/2019 12:35:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Anisha
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Date: 11/21/2019 2:37:00 AM
beautiful poem penned on the conversation between son and mom
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/21/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thanks n Blessing

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