Mystic Rose Rose Poet Acrostic

Dear Inner Child

  
 
 *I close my eyes and think of you and though the stars of night 
have silvered me with age they still unlock my mind, 
time after time * 
 

Inner child of mine don't fail me now 
Nacred with age and light I am nearing the hour    
Naturally, like a child yawning in her sleep 
Eternal as the sea I ebb and then recede 
Receive me now oh sleeping child and help me 

Cardiac rhythms slow but heart is keeping pace 
Harmony of life still wrapped within my youth 
I'd like to open you and cradle you once more 
Love me inner child, love me tenderly until I , 
Die 

September 5, 2021 
Sponsor	Chantelle Anne Cooke
Contest Name	Your Inner Child

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Paula Goldsmith September 14, 2021 at 8:56 AM Back with Congratulations on this win. A wonderful Acrostic write. Have a great/blessed day..............

Beata Agustin September 13, 2021 at 8:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me see a part of the child in you. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex September 13, 2021 at 7:32 PM Beautiful work in the form of an acrostic. Enjoyed reading it. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith September 10, 2021 at 8:34 AM A creative/wonderful write. Yes, inner child stay with us. You keep us young. Have a great/blessed day..................

Delice Arleen Skelly September 6, 2021 at 3:12 AM Yes, Victor is right, a trifle sad but bitter sweet as well...Delice

Victor Buhagiar September 6, 2021 at 1:27 AM Masterfully composed though a trifle sad. But then who is not in my old age? Hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 5, 2021 at 7:44 PM This is so beautiful and expertly crafted! We should all embrace our inner child. Best of wishes for the contest. :)