Dear God

Dear God up Above Shelter Those in need of your protection and love. Help them find a safe place to stay And erase all their pain away Comfort those who are alone And those who are far away from home. Give them hope and piece of mind That in the end all will be fine. Send a meal to all those in need Even those that had bad deeds Some believe the end is near As they live each day in dreadful fear Send them a sign to not give in And by working together we will win So Dear God Up Above This is my prayer sent with all my love.

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John Posey

Date: 6/24/2013 8:37:00 AM

Sasha, I believe God heard your earnest plea.... and you will soon receive comfort about your concerns.... I stand in agreement with your prayer..... Jake

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/6/2013 11:40:00 PM

Exellent write here Shasha, And we know God is willing...but the flesh of those in power is so weak..' i believe they cannot think beyond the next power summit ) or the next bathful of champagne..or whatever they wish to occupy themselves with ( there is such politcall correctness.. yet still such atrocites..keep well Joe..)

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 5/22/2013 9:19:00 AM

Very nice prayer here! I like the way you view things. Striving and hoping for a better world instead of complaining of the bad. That is what makes a difference.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/19/2013 8:59:00 AM

really great write, superbly written & so inspiring. well done, have blessed day, Gordon

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 PM

A nice poetic supplication i liked reading. Swell!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/14/2013 8:51:00 PM

Excellent. God's love and care are the best in this world. Lovely prayer. Thanks for sharing.

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/14/2013 2:21:00 PM

This is a needy prayer Shasha for every soul in this world. Beautiful words. Thank you for including me too in the prayer. Hugs manel

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/14/2013 9:58:00 AM

- Sasha, a beautiful poem - touches my heart - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/14/2013 8:33:00 AM

"Piece" of mind, should be "Peace" of mind...unless that was intentional. Because, if so, that was well done. Either way, I really enjoyed this dedication filled of wishful thoughts & hopes. We need more pieces(peaces? lol) like this. :)

Sasha Maharaj
Date: 5/14/2013 8:44:00 AM

lol i see what u did there.. hehehe e Thank You Drake