Sasha Maharaj Poet Rhyme

Dear God

Dear God up Above
Shelter Those in need of your protection and love. 
Help them find a safe place to stay 
And erase all their pain away

Comfort those who are alone
And those who are far away from home. 
Give them hope and piece of mind
That in the end all will be fine. 

Send a meal to all those in need
Even those that had bad deeds
Some believe the end is near
As they live each day in dreadful fear

Send them a sign to not give in
And by working together we will win
So Dear God Up Above 
This is my prayer sent with all my love.

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John Posey June 24, 2013 at 8:37 AM Sasha, I believe God heard your earnest plea.... and you will soon receive comfort about your concerns.... I stand in agreement with your prayer..... Jake

Joe Maverick June 6, 2013 at 11:40 PM Exellent write here Shasha, And we know God is willing...but the flesh of those in power is so weak..' i believe they cannot think beyond the next power summit ) or the next bathful of champagne..or whatever they wish to occupy themselves with ( there is such politcall correctness.. yet still such atrocites..keep well Joe..)

Isaiah Zerbst May 22, 2013 at 9:19 AM Very nice prayer here! I like the way you view things. Striving and hoping for a better world instead of complaining of the bad. That is what makes a difference.

Gordon Mcconnell May 19, 2013 at 8:59 AM really great write, superbly written & so inspiring. well done, have blessed day, Gordon

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri May 14, 2013 at 10:21 PM A nice poetic supplication i liked reading. Swell!

Ravi Sathasivam May 14, 2013 at 8:51 PM Excellent. God's love and care are the best in this world. Lovely prayer. Thanks for sharing.

Manel Gunatillake May 14, 2013 at 2:21 PM This is a needy prayer Shasha for every soul in this world. Beautiful words. Thank you for including me too in the prayer. Hugs manel

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2013 at 9:58 AM - Sasha, a beautiful poem - touches my heart - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito May 14, 2013 at 8:33 AM "Piece" of mind, should be "Peace" of mind...unless that was intentional. Because, if so, that was well done. Either way, I really enjoyed this dedication filled of wishful thoughts & hopes. We need more pieces(peaces? lol) like this. :) Sasha Maharaj May 14, 2013 at 8:44 AM lol i see what u did there.. hehehe e Thank You Drake