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Dear Friend

Dear friend, Is it your feeble knock i hear Waiting to offer a lifetime tale Wailing in gasps to create This great affinity we treasure? I'll be lying if I denied so Is it real, That it's you and I who blew that candle And left luscious tones vibrating behind That its you and I who made the bond to be in full bloom And brought to life a sedate surpassing beauty A beauty of life A friendship for life? I'll be honest to claim it so I've searched every nook and cranny So as to get a friend like you I've journeyed with every of my thought And, all I can say is, THANK YOU For a great friend you've been For a best friend you'll always be This poem is very special to me. It's one of my two poems that were featured in Young Nation section in kenya Daily Nation Newspaper. That meant a lot to me. Written between 2000-2003 Just the young thoughts of the young mind

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Date: 2/25/2015 8:37:00 PM
These are precious words . . . we are made to relate, to share, to experience life together . . . your poem allowed me to share a little time with you! Special and sincere . . . 7
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/27/2015 12:15:00 AM
I like how you say my poem allowed you to share a little time with me! That's SWEET! Thank you David.
Date: 2/25/2015 4:55:00 PM
Lovely...good concept
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/25/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Phemmy. Blessings to you
Date: 2/25/2015 4:43:00 PM
This is a great piece njeri...a 7+++...hugs Tim
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/25/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Tim. Blessings

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