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Dear Depressed

I feel the agony of your anguish, The pulsing pain that now persists I hear distant calls of your distress And hear tell your tears of torment Hold my hand and hear The words I write Modest but meaningful Practical, not trite Wake up! Wake up! He shoved you out and slammed the door Played you as a pastime You lost, get off the floor Broken? Bruised and banished It was deceit not love And now he’s vanished Remodeling? Not his house, his life Get the message? Not his sister, but his wife Depressed? You listened to the lies Forget the flashy fool Time now for good-byes Morning Sickness? Advise to see a doctor Could be something more It might be two not one You need to float ashore Restore! Rise like spring from winter Fresh seeds will sow your way You are someone special Remind yourself each day Agony Aunt allpoetry contest: "Agony Aunt – letter prompt” by Vicki Tsiluma],/em>

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Date: 4/4/2014 11:21:00 PM
spirited piece, sue.. sweet kudos on your award !.. huggs
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Date: 4/3/2014 10:11:00 PM
SUE , congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/3/2014 12:04:00 PM
Hi Sue, :) Congratulations, the poem's awesome. Enjoyed your vice.... luv LINDA
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Date: 4/3/2014 8:47:00 AM
congratulations Sue xx
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Date: 4/3/2014 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win in the contest Agony Aunt, enjoyed it, Sue
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Date: 2/23/2014 4:24:00 PM
A true to life write here great job, it's reality at it's best, the best one can do is move forward not just lie their crying over things one cannot change. Love the strong advise you've given here in a caring way, great job fellow souper. cheri
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Sue K Green
Date: 2/23/2014 5:25:00 PM
Appreciate the comment. This was in answer to an 'Aunt Agony' (like a Dear Ann columnist) letter from 'Depressed.'

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